Sunday, February 9, 2014

Lion Project



The Lion Project
            The single story of California might not be as harmful as that of Africa but the interesting thing is how people try and dismiss their single story. The two texts that try and clear up of the single story of both their cultures are Things Fall Apart by Chinua Achebe, and the Misconceptions – Visit California Commercial. Even though the Visit California video is a commercial for a tourism website, it paints a more complete picture of what everyone else sees and thinks of about SoCal and California in general. One of the most important parts about this video is that it shows that some Californians do surf and go to the beach but the video also demonstrates that Californians also do a lot of other things as well[p1] . The commercial uses the stereotypes of California to complete the story. Another side source that I found was a blog by a TCU student named Sydney Green. Her blog uses a more personal way of debunking California stereotypes.
Achebe similarly portrays Okonkwo in Things Fall Apart. Throughout the story Achebe depicts Okonkwo as the poster child in the Ibo people’s eyes. But Achebe also displays how Okonkwo often loses his temper and beats up his wives and children. Although this is not a good characterization of Okonkwo Achebe still includes it in the story because that gives the whole story. [p2] The difference between the way that Achebe and the commercial attempt to dismiss the single story is that Achebe emphasizes some of the negatives more than the commercial.
The real difference in how the two texts try and present a more complete story of their culture is the amount of balance each text uses. In Things Fall Apart Achebe clearly uses more of the negative sides. He shows this in the very beginning of the story when talking about some of Okonkwo’s characterizations and says, “He had a slight stammer and whenever he was angry and could not get his words out quickly enough, he would use his fists.” (Achebe, 4) This is definitely not one of Okonkwo’s best attributes but non-the less is very important to include it because it is part of Okonkwo’s and the Ibo people’s complete story. While Achebe gives examples of Okonkwo’s weaker side the Visit California commercial mainly just shows the best parts of California. Nowhere in the commercial does it show the amount of poverty and struggle that is actually present in a lot of California. The commercial is an example of a way of overcorrecting the situation by telling just the good parts and not everything[TB3] .[p4] 
Another thing that many if not most people think about is that [p5] Africa is completely uncivilized and there is no strong sense of community. After another tribe captured and killed an Ibo girl, the Ibo tribe decided to take tradition action, Achebe writes, “An ultimatum was immediately dispatched to Mbaino asking them to choose between war on one hand, and on the other the offer of a young man and a virgin as compensation.” (11) While to most people the offer might seem odd, but it was a traditional trade that each tribe had been doing for a very long time. The fact that the Ibo people have these traditions demonstrates how they are not barbaric or uncivilized and have a strong community. Although community is not a strong essence in the commercial, a feeling of togetherness is still present, in the way that because the commercial cuts go so quick from place to place it makes California feel like such a small place[p6] .
One of the biggest misconceptions about California and the people who live there are that not everyone goes to the beach and surfs all day. A former Californian TCU college students named Sydney Green writes on her blog, “I would just much rather lay in bed. And when the weather is just too nice, I move to the couch.” (The Californians: Stereotypes Debunked) [p7] Similar[TB8]  to anywhere in the US there are many people in California who enjoy staying at home and reading books. Just like how certain stereotypes are created about Californians, the same happens to Africa. People hear about one situation and generalize that the whole continent is the exact same to that one situation. One product that comes from this idea is that every person in Africa is starving and doesn’t know how to supply himself or herself with food. During one of the growing seasons for the Ibo people Achebe writes, “The yams put on luxuriant green leaves, but every farmer knew that without sunshine the tubers would not grow.” (24) While many of the Ibo people might not be educated in stuff like calculus, they learned what they needed to know. The farmers knew that even though the yams were growing luxuriant leaves, they needed sunshine in order for the yams to grow[p9] . Throughout the book yams played a very big part in the Ibo peoples lives and shows that they do have a means of food. This also shows that many people in Africa are and were living perfectly independent lives.
Out of all the misconceptions and stereotypes about Africa the biggest one is that every person in Africa needs help and salvation from their terrible lives and that they don’t work hard. Towards the end of Things Fall Apart missionaries come to Nigeria and try and convert people to Christianity. While talking to the Ibo people one of the missionaries said, “We have been sent by this great God to ask you to leave your wicked ways and false gods and turn to Him so that you may be saved when you die.” (145) Without knowing anything about the Ibo people’s culture the missionaries came to their homeland and basically said, everything that you have ever believed in is wrong and we are right. People think almost the opposite about California. Instead of thinking Californians need help, many people think that everyone who lives in California doesn’t have any responsibilities or worries. In fact people in California have to work just like any one else. In the commercial at the very end it shows popular celebrity Betty White on set in Hollywood, even though she is an actress she still had to work hard to become what she is today. Everyone no matter where, whether it’s in Africa or California have to work to be successful[p10] .
There are many different stereotypes and many different misconceptions in this world but the real challenge is how to deal with them. Even though it is tempting to only show the best qualities of the story like in the commercial. It is important to remember that the complete story includes everything, including the good, the bad, and the ugly, just like what Chinua Achebe did in Things Fall Apart[p11] .

 [p1]What is your thesis? Does it have how both authors try to complete the single story?
 [p2]I like how you show the good and the bad to complete the whole story

 [TB3]This is how the commercial completes the single story.
 [p4]Then how does this commercial complete the single story of california?
 [p5]Super wordy

 [p6]I like how you show the differences and similarities of the commerical and things fall apart

 [p7]Are you using to different sources? If so i think you have to put it in the into.
 [TB8]I added something in the first paragraph but I wasn’t sure if that was what you were looking for
 [p9]I like how you wrote about what they need to know and what is important for them to survive in their culture J

 [p10]What you are saying in the beginning of the paragraph doesnt really stay that way all the way through.  Stay more on track
 [p11]Really good summary and “bigger Picture” of the essay. Short and sweet J J

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